Review Detail of dopefixes in Into Your Shoes

Man, I really think this story has a lot to portray and I think that after a few more chapters it will be a major hit if you keep the parameters constant in relation to this 1st chapter. This thing is bound to be a hit. But I would appreciate it more if gave us a bit more insight on the character's points of view as this would pull in the reader making it a tad more immersive.