Review Detail of Primordial_Saiyan in MY HERO ACADEMIA SENTRY PRIME ( MILLION SUNS) MULITIVERSE MASHUP

Well, so far it's going good. The progression is good. But the only problem is the few errors I've already mentioned in previous comment on a chapter. The lack of and wrong use of punctuation. And sometimes it's hard to figure out who's delivering the dialogue or if it even is a dialogue to begin with. Otherwise it's a good read. Have to read more to know. All the best, author 👍🏼