Its a good story premise with decent execution. I wont give spoilers but it is still in the beginning stages thus far in chapter 6. Decent progression of events and character interaction.
Zoomshoe
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LIKEYou’re already on the right track Zoom. There are a few points where the ages seems to become muddled but aside from that, its more nitpicking and bias than anything else lol.
Zoomshoe:Thank you for the positive review brother, I shall try my best to keep this up.