Review Detail of Dara_Manuel in ATTACHMENT

Although it has only two chapters at the moment I think the author is in a good path. The introduction was clear and straightforward it gave me an all-around idea of what the book is all about, so good job there. The grammar can be improved, some punctuation were missing and I noticed that after the apostrophe followed small letters, I think it should be capital letters. To summarize, this book is going in the right direction. I'm also busy with my first book and I realized that improvement comes as you move forward, you can use apps like Grammarly to improve the grammer, and don't rush, move at your own pace.