Review Detail of Blackpaint in ATTACHMENT

Nice start. I'll focus on the story first. It's a cute story indeed and I'm looking forward on how the FL would do in the company. The characters are still developing since it's only the start but the FL is very cute and still optimistic despite several misfortunes. Regarding the writing quality, the author clearly stated that it's their first book so I'm considering it in rating. I'm not a native english speaker so I'm not fluent as well, but if I could give an advice, please do capitalize the first word even in the dialogues. For example: "Are you okay?" "Yes." I'm not really irked with minor typos and such but other readers do, so it will be nice if you proofread before publishing. Anyway, I know the writing would improve as you continue writing. Fighting!