Review Detail of kidd17 in The Villainess's Revenge

it's great story but I think you should make some improvement on the way you tell the readers, at the beginning on the confluct. I prefer you tell to the readers with full one chapter about their happy life, and the next chapter it's the conflict. I feel the emotion is plain. So the readers will hate the villain so much. not fall for him. But it's a good story and I need more chapter!