Review Detail of Stormzz in Pranking the Prank King

The pacing of the novel was fine, and I thought the shorter chapters was fine. The writing quality is quite bad. For the most part, punctuation is fine but I noticed the author not leaving spaces after things like commas. I noticed missed capitalisation and, the biggest issue, the author using "am" when it should be "I'm." The author also used slang in the descriptions of scenes which felt out of place.