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This story has been a fun casual read. that would be interesting to see how it develops. im not opposed to the main character ending up being overpowered. just as long as it's not shoved down our throat excessively. wich so far this story has not passed the line into too much. Writing Quality 4/5 - very few real issues that I remember. just a reminder to watch your characters gender. more than a few times I stumbled across a character being accidently genderswapped causing light confusion and having to reread the sentence to make sure I knew what character I was reading about. Story Development - 5/5 - Wonderful pacing of the story, slow enough to build the world, but fast enough that it keeps you interested. Character Design - 4/5 - Characters are interesting and have a little more depth to them then similar story types. my hope is while you grow your main character you continue to develop your side characters and dive them more depth. Update Stability - 3/5 z you will get better with this. I believe in you. World background - 5/5 - love how they have crafted the background in their world and hope they continue to develop it. it really adds to the story when you successfully develop a good background to work with.

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