Review Detail of Kiyoung in Yandere Instruction Manual

Excellent story and concept ruined by bad writing skills. Most of the sentences don't make sense and are grammatically incorrect. Like this from CH-6: "And the astonishing fact is that in this world and women are born equal and whoever trains can become strong regardless of their gender." This sentence can be written a lot better..... Is this MTL? The only time I've ever seen something written this bad was using MTL, and that's compared to bad MTLs. I hope author improves his writing skills. Try running it through Grammarly or a proofreader. This novel has a lot of potential.