The story so far has been really good and I have enjoyed it but I feel the author has rushed many different concepts and skipped over many different important details. Another thing is the grammatical errors, there are many and the flow of the sentences don't add up all that well. Don't get me wrong this story is worth a read but a few things could be fixed.
Zayn_Nicolas
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