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Review Detail of LawWillOblivionK in Yandere Instruction Manual

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LawWillOblivionK
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First review. This novel is a good read for Yandere Lovers. Writing Quality: Almost no grammatical errors. Stability of Updates: 1 chapter a day Stroy Development: Can be improved in the first life of the mc. The second life of the mc is developing nicely. Character Design: Well Designed. World Background: The first world was lacking but the second is coming along well. Character Interaction: This part can be developed especially in his first living with his wife The mc is good. He loves his Yanderes. But he does not like his Yanderes killing people(Women) he talks with.He can be more developed.Aside from that, it is one of the best Yandere Novels on this site. If it goes according to the current quality.

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Zayn_Nicolas
Zayn_NicolasAuthorZayn_Nicolas

Thank you for your review and i will try to improve the points you mentioned

Awesome_Alankrit
Awesome_AlankritLv3Awesome_Alankrit

is it only me or you like lolis author?

Zayn_Nicolas:Thank you for your review and i will try to improve the points you mentioned
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Zayn_Nicolas
Zayn_NicolasAuthorZayn_Nicolas

The answer will be in the future chapters of this novel.

Awesome_Alankrit:is it only me or you like lolis author?
I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13I_Love_Hina

yo it's the man of culture