Review Detail of Cowshed in God of Archery

Before I talk about the contents of the novel, I would like to rate my book 1 star and you guys decide its worth. Don't worry and don't be shy, I will not delete a single review! Let's talk about the novels. This is a story about a young man who loves the bow. He is just a youngster with a dream like others do. He has average talent but his life change when he acquires a mystical book. This is his legend! Pros. 1. A complex character with each their owns goal and motivation. Villains can be deep too depends on my writing skills and how I'll manage to present them. 2. Each had a reason for their actions. If you might encounter a stupid villain in the first chap, I’ll promise you there's a meaning behind his/her action. 3. A unique world-building with my own power scaling. I contemplated about the cultivation levels and manage to connect them all; this is to show you how a mortal turns into an immortal. One of the themes behind the story is ‘Cultivation and Cultivators’. 4. Each chapter has 3000-4000 words. Battles will have 2000-3000 words per chap. Cons 1. Too much exposition. I know this sounds bad but I am a fan of (Martial World) and have always been eager to write such a novel with an exposition that flows very well. 2. I'm not a native English but that doesn't mean I can't write with proper grammar. Ar most, the quality of the chaps is above average. 3. I write this for fun and to explore my imagination. So I might disappear for a day suddenly without a day. 4. My writing and plot might have been influenced by (MW) so I seek forgiveness if I disappoint everyone.