Review Detail of Apocalypse_2ndLife in Sect Leader's Rise to the top!

Flaw after flaw and cliche after cliche MC has ez system but still can't sit in one place and get strong enough not to be squashed first before moving. Unnecessary, unrealistic chats bw people. Says one thing to do or not do but slaps himself in the face next chapter. Very first example - Huang city was massive and has loads a low lvl body cultivator but it didn't have any low level hunting ground nearby ? Is it logically posible that sooo many people unnecessary live in a town where they won't earn ? Nop writing by making shopkeeper and such characters act arrogant in front of hunters not realistic (just from firsttown some ) Same kept repeating later i tried to get into some more and just some more chaps but these common sense holes don't stop[img=faceslap]