Review Detail of MarcGem in Sect Leader's Rise to the top!

Writing quality 2/5- If I'm guessing, author's first language isn't English. Lots of mistakes everywhere in general. Story development 2/5- Very 'go with the flow' -esque. It's just not interesting. Story is 'told' and not 'shown'. Character design 2/5 - MC makes some smart moves from time to time. Though there's not much substance to him or the side characters. Side characters are dumb, MC is overpowered, and they worship the MC. MC also makes some bad decisions with no good reason. World background 3/5 - Maybe the saving grace of this novel. Personally, I like cultivation backgrounds, so I'm rating this a bit higher. Otherwise, it would be a 2.5/5 for the low level of originality. Author needs to step up his game and learn how to describe landscapes.