Review Detail of Everythingonurmind in Sect Leader's Rise to the top!

this is my 3rd sect building novel, there is a bit of clique here and there and some things and events need more explanation (like the stages of cultivation and why he doesn't breakthrough even tho he has the requirements for it ? ) overall its decent in its genre. if I was trying to be brutally honest this would get 2 stars but since most writers aren't experienced on this website and considering avg quality of novels here it definitely deserves a 4 star.