Review Detail of So_Sa in Sect Leader's Rise to the top!

Hello, Humble Author of this novel (See how I didn't give myself a 5 star?... very humble!). Thanks to everyone taking the time to read my story. If you enjoy it and want to help me make it better, I'd appreciate letting me know about any mistakes in grammar or inconsistencies. This is my first novel and English isn't my main language so please go easy on me lol. There are quite a few obvious tropes but it's bound to be like that since I write stories that I enjoy reading...I will release bulk chapters in the beginning however at around chapter 20, it will become one per day as that would catch up to my writing speed.