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Review Detail of AnotherView in The First Store System

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AnotherView
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I liked the story, but the plot became repetitive and with fillers First, the chapters called "Battle" and "Clash" where the MC trains don't add anything (filler) Second, the VR world doesn't particularly help the story progression and even hinders it (filler) Third, the system has infinite energy and creates things out of nothing. You could tell the MC has something to do with the Devas, but it seems like bullshit. Fourth, the development is very slow, I'm around chapter 500 and the store updates leave something to be desired. He is still in the mortal realm and it doesn't look like he will change before chapter 1000

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The First Store System

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