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pinaka_
pinaka_Author2yrpinaka_

Since 50 chapters have been published, I think it's time for me to review my book. I gave the book five stars because the book is great (I'm not shameless). Writing quality is up to the readers to judge, not me. Uploads are stable, and I upload two chapters daily. The story has only started, so there are lots of development to come. Mc is an overpowered character and operates a store. To judge his personality, you would've to read. World background isn't that detailed since the story is set in the Multiverse, and there are infinite worlds.

The First Store System

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TheFool10
TheFool10Lv3TheFool10

are mc trying to act cool or something like most store manager trying to be mystery??

pinaka_:Meaning?
pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

If you have any questions regarding the story, you can ask here?

Daoist_Iveyflame
Daoist_IveyflameLv15Daoist_Iveyflame

I don't see a tag for it so I'm going to ask is there any romance I'm not talking about a harem just wanted to see if the MC gets himself a girlfriend

pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

At this point, I don't have any plans to introduce romance. It all depends on the story in the future.

Daoist_Iveyflame:I don't see a tag for it so I'm going to ask is there any romance I'm not talking about a harem just wanted to see if the MC gets himself a girlfriend
Kagami95
Kagami95Lv12Kagami95

Any romance or harem???

pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

No!

Kagami95:Any romance or harem???
Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13Lazy_Chicken_God

Does the Mc go to different worlds with his store or is it just that anyone can find it? If he goes to different worlds does he nurture any Mc?

pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

I can only tell you that he wouldn't nurture any character

Lazy_Chicken_God:Does the Mc go to different worlds with his store or is it just that anyone can find it? If he goes to different worlds does he nurture any Mc?
BlindCrown
BlindCrownLv2BlindCrown

Humble enough, but the quality is really not bad

BlindCrown
BlindCrownLv2BlindCrown

Just don't make him like other store manager mcs

pinaka_:At this point, I don't have any plans to introduce romance. It all depends on the story in the future.
pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

Meaning?

BlindCrown:Just don't make him like other store manager mcs
SujayPatra
SujayPatraLv10SujayPatra

I don't know if you've heard of it or not but there is a Novel "Traffords Trading Club". Is the story somehow similar to that one? Or this story is very unique of its own? Just curious. Planning to read it .

pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

Yes, I've read starting few chapters of that novel. My book is different from that. You can try it, maybe you'll like it.

SujayPatra:I don't know if you've heard of it or not but there is a Novel "Traffords Trading Club". Is the story somehow similar to that one? Or this story is very unique of its own? Just curious. Planning to read it .
SujayPatra
SujayPatraLv10SujayPatra

Sure will give it a try.

pinaka_:Yes, I've read starting few chapters of that novel. My book is different from that. You can try it, maybe you'll like it.
ikka
ikkaLv13ikka

plz dont ruin it with romance

pinaka_:At this point, I don't have any plans to introduce romance. It all depends on the story in the future.
pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

There won't be any!

ikka:plz dont ruin it with romance
THANATOS_
THANATOS_Lv4THANATOS_

Does it have not have any action? O didn't see it in the tags so I was curious.

pinaka_
pinaka_Authorpinaka_

There would be some, but not that much

THANATOS_:Does it have not have any action? O didn't see it in the tags so I was curious.
Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4Gojusensi_441

pls don't spoil it by bringing romance

pinaka_:At this point, I don't have any plans to introduce romance. It all depends on the story in the future.
Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4Gojusensi_441

is it similar to black internet cafe system

pinaka_:Yes, I've read starting few chapters of that novel. My book is different from that. You can try it, maybe you'll like it.