Review Detail of Rizki_Caturianto in Hadrian Peverell in Twilight

It's a great Twilight fanfiction!!! 👍👍 I like how Harry doesn't know about Twilight plot and make many2 change, like Jane, Alec, Demitri, Stevan, Marcus, etc join his coven.. They even have mates.. 👍👍👍 The only downside is you make Harry/Hadrian so OP.. He even can make a vampire pregnant and have a baby.. The grammar is also a bit hard to read, but I still understand what you mean.. Well, that's all is just my opinion, hope you don't mind a bit critics 😁😁 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 👍👍👍😍😍