Review Detail of Barbara_Monstadt in breaking 4th dimension

thanks for the review , I mean it isn't perfectly written but even if I make grammar mistakes, I m just trying to write something that's abit different from other novels , I have seen like 9 out of ten novels either , system novels or reincarnation and transmigration novels, no offense to them but reading that type of genre sometimes is boring and I can attest to that SO that's why I am trying to write something different