Review Detail of _VIIX_ in Danmachi: Rise of The Rampart

Decent fanfic but I don't see the appeal 'YET'... Writing Quality: For grammar I'd give 4.5/5 because there aren't much mistakes. But I don't really know the scenes just don't flow for me during the dialogues. So that would be 2.5 on that. Story Development: This review has been made after catching up to Chapter 47. The story development so far has been lackluster tbh. The fights aren't that intense imo. I'd suggest the author to read/watch some Action/Thriller Piece. Everything seems just so dull that one would just skip over parts. So 3/5 Character Design: The most confusing thing for me in this novel. The only reason for the reincarnation tag is to justify the wiki knowledge. Aside from that the whole University student thing is just written to increase the word count. MC isn't mature. That's a lie. You'd be better off assuming the MC as a 5 y/o kid posing as a 12 y/o kid. His established background and his mentality just don't match. It's like he never grew up, neither he has the mature thinking of a uni student nor does he have the maturity of a kid that supposedly grew up as an orphan in the most dangerous part of orario. And that's not all, 47 chapters in and the MC hardly has a vague idea about his future goal but no effort put into actualising it. The side characters are okayish. While I'm glad that the author is giving focus to side chars, tbh I don't really care for slice of life chapters of the side chars. So 2/5 Updating Stability: ?/5 That's something that you can decide basing on the author's drop history World background: So far the best part of the fiction. I applaud the author for actually doing this part. I like the timeline. 5/5