Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in Purple Shades of Blood

This story is very intriguing to read. It's has a unique plotline, and I also like the characters, especially the main character. It hits different because I love how Leo was portrayed and can be vulnerable, which most other male leads tend not to be. However, there were a few grammatical errors that need to be corrected and improved. Also, note the choices of words to be used. Those were my only concerns, but it really is a very interesting story. I think this has a lot of potentials and could be better. I wish the author the best of luck!