Review Detail of THORN in Drakken's Revenge (Kim Possible)

Although the fanfic only has 16 chapters, I'm already feeling like it's been quite a journey since MC transferred his memory to his past self. I didn't really see any grammar mistakes throughout the story. The actions of the characters are well justified albeit there are some plot holes visible. I'll still give this 5 stars since it's a unique story that will obviously be attractive to readers who like stereotype villain MCs.