Review Detail of AmberFullMoon in Sasuke's Revenge[r18]

I read enough paragraphs to know that: 1. the author can't write, not even apply basic rules. 2. the author can't build: - characters - climate - tension - action 3. the author had a wet fantasy starring someone else's characters and described it without any respect for the characters and, to be honest, for the reader. 4. this text has no pluses, no value.