Review Detail of Kelly_Pham in I Transmigrate as a Single Mother of the Three Antagonists

I tried. I think I gave this story a good shot, since I read all the way up to ch 305. The quality of the writing has stayed the same. It’s way too fast-paced and the world is not built at all. I barely register the world. Each conflict takes like 5 ch to resolve and each chapter is very short. The story should be fleshed out more. There is no suspense in anything, and I could not care about the characters anymore. The characters are very flat, and the children only appear in the beginning. They pop up now and again but act way too weird, even for geniuses. The ML is trusts the MC way too much and too easily for someone given his position and how he was claimed to act ij the past. The relationship between multiple characters are messy and the villains don’t have any other motive for what they do other than “I hate the MC” which by now, doesn’t feel like it’s enough. Since I don’t know what the raw is like, I can only assume the translation is good as it can be, and the original story is messy itself.