Review Detail of Stevefpx in The Legendary Ghost Hunter
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ill be fair, overpowered is not the right tag. it must be weak to strong as mc was not overpowered at start but followed step by step his increase of strength. I've rated it as 3.4 because of the tag, second is the sense of justice of her partner who wants to change mc's hatred. its kinda naive thought. you can't change a person's perspective of ghost especially if he saw his parents murdered right in front of his eyes. aside from that mc's character is cool, the voice that help mc is kinda vague but overall the writing is splendid world background is splendid.
The Legendary Ghost Hunter
Cyclxne
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1. Finn is overpowered, compared to other Ghost Hunters. He has a cheat ability that allows him to steal powers from BOTH other Angelica users and Ghosts. You can't tell me that isn't a broken power to have. 2. Iris isn't trying to make Finn stop hating Ghosts. She just wants to prevent him from drowning so much in seeking revenge that he loses sight of himself and his human morals. When someone becomes so hellbent on revenge that they are willing to hurt even their own allies, they've gone too far.
Yeah, but in your prologue you said that he would be emotionless and have an indomitable will that wouldnt be shaken. From this your statement seems to conflict with your original writing, no? Afterall if his ideals were to be changed by a single person then he would be shown to have both emotions and a unstable resolve.
Cyclxne:1. Finn is overpowered, compared to other Ghost Hunters. He has a cheat ability that allows him to steal powers from BOTH other Angelica users and Ghosts. You can't tell me that isn't a broken power to have. 2. Iris isn't trying to make Finn stop hating Ghosts. She just wants to prevent him from drowning so much in seeking revenge that he loses sight of himself and his human morals. When someone becomes so hellbent on revenge that they are willing to hurt even their own allies, they've gone too far.
CryptoCat:Yeah, but in your prologue you said that he would be emotionless and have an indomitable will that wouldnt be shaken. From this your statement seems to conflict with your original writing, no? Afterall if his ideals were to be changed by a single person then he would be shown to have both emotions and a unstable resolve.
CryptoCat:Yeah, but in your prologue you said that he would be emotionless and have an indomitable will that wouldnt be shaken. From this your statement seems to conflict with your original writing, no? Afterall if his ideals were to be changed by a single person then he would be shown to have both emotions and a unstable resolve.
Cyclxne:I said that Iris would TRY to change him. Will it actually work? Lol read the book to find out.