Review Detail of Young_Master_Jay in The Legendary Ghost Hunter

Item: The Legendary Ghost Hunter
Rating: 4.4

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Young_Master_JayLv102yrYoung_Master_Jay

I think the author needs to be careful with the choice of words Aside from that, the book has its own uniqueness, It is great and it would be better if it had more chapters.

The Legendary Ghost Hunter

Cyclxne

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CyclxneAuthorCyclxne

Wdym choice of words? Could you please elaborate?

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Young_Master_JayLv10Young_Master_Jay

In chapter one, instead of 'Blackness of night,' I think it would be better if you use 'darkness of the night.'

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Young_Master_JayLv10Young_Master_Jay

then in chapter two, the word Expungement. it might sound cool but I suggest you consider another word, or perhaps you should eleborate the word as soon as you netioned it.

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CyclxneAuthorCyclxne

I see, thanks!

Young_Master_Jay:In chapter one, instead of 'Blackness of night,' I think it would be better if you use 'darkness of the night.'

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