WQ: To be honest, it's better than a lot of works here (which isn't necessarily good), and in the relaxed reading I did, I didn't notice mistakes or anything that bothered me. US: very good. SD: You know, the usual. Nothing to comment. CD: good too. WB: well it's Naruto. And Naruto's WB isn't the best (far from the best) but who cares? Personal evaluation: "rise to the top" gives an idea of ascension, which we don't see when in the first chapter the protagonist gets 5 wishes, which, speaking of them, is the same as always. Powers that defy the power scale of the piece (since it's Naruto, it doesn't matter, the entire anime is broken in this regard), talents, etc. But again, who cares? I recommend reading, it's a lot of fun.
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