Review Detail of GloryForAll in Rebirth Of The Big Shot

I like the all mighty daughter novels. That being said, the ideas you used were good; however, your grammar was lacking in key areas. Are the Ning siblings her siblings or cousins/relatives? They don’t have the same surname nor do they live together. That being said, they share the same surname as her mother, but they also are portrayed as not part of the same family as the MCs maternal family. Just a cluster of confusing information that needs to be made clear from the start. There are other examples that follow the same design. Incorrect word choice is a common occurrence within the novel. I can read mtl novels that are filled with bad grammar, but I can also still get a good understanding of what is happening at all points since key information is displayed correctly.