Review Detail of Evertruth727_ in Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.
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Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.
Evertruth727_
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It's a different concept from both of those. It's not "Planetary war" nor "Space war". I can't tell what it is since it would be a spoiler... but let's just say... a very large " PLACE"
Azarcrow:HELLO AUTHOR, I HAVE A QUESTION. WILL THIS NOVEL HAVE A SPACE WARS OR JUST PLANETARY WARS?
The important thing is my friend, in fact, the hero is of a snake origin. He must be an enemy to humans by nature, meaning monsters eat humans, and the stronger the human being, the greater the benefits when killing or devouring him. I hope to make him evil and an enemy to humans. If a human becomes a monster with the power of a beast he will become more deadly, so don't make him like all the trash heroes trying to act kind, simply the world of dogs eat dogs, strong is the law, there is no such thing as evil and good these are childish words for idiot Naruto, there are only benefits and it is true human nature If killing increases human strength, I am sure that everyone will become a professional butcher. As for the weak, their fate is nothing but the dustbin of history. Comedy and romance destroy good novels. Try to avoid them. I hope you understand what I mean.
Well... I did add in a bit of a sense of comedy since I was afraid of people being bored of continuous action. But I do get your point... thank you so much... I will be improving the story from now on based on your ideas.
Master_Of_gu:The important thing is my friend, in fact, the hero is of a snake origin. He must be an enemy to humans by nature, meaning monsters eat humans, and the stronger the human being, the greater the benefits when killing or devouring him. I hope to make him evil and an enemy to humans. If a human becomes a monster with the power of a beast he will become more deadly, so don't make him like all the trash heroes trying to act kind, simply the world of dogs eat dogs, strong is the law, there is no such thing as evil and good these are childish words for idiot Naruto, there are only benefits and it is true human nature If killing increases human strength, I am sure that everyone will become a professional butcher. As for the weak, their fate is nothing but the dustbin of history. Comedy and romance destroy good novels. Try to avoid them. I hope you understand what I mean.
The boring thing is for the hero to be like the rest of the heroes in other novels. This is trite. As for the evil hero, it is difficult to predict his movements and actions. It is more fun. If killing increases your strength, why not do it?! And if it is theft that increases your strength, why not do this to your world, you determine the laws, get out of the well and look at the sky. My friend, the thing that humans enjoy the most is blood, betrayal, murder, theft, hypocrisy and deception is important. There are many readers looking for evil heroes such as the hero Fang Yuan. This novel became famous because of the cruelty and evil of the hero and his slaughter of millions without hesitation
Evertruth727_:Well... I did add in a bit of a sense of comedy since I was afraid of people being bored of continuous action. But I do get your point... thank you so much... I will be improving the story from now on based on your ideas.
Master_Of_gu:The boring thing is for the hero to be like the rest of the heroes in other novels. This is trite. As for the evil hero, it is difficult to predict his movements and actions. It is more fun. If killing increases your strength, why not do it?! And if it is theft that increases your strength, why not do this to your world, you determine the laws, get out of the well and look at the sky. My friend, the thing that humans enjoy the most is blood, betrayal, murder, theft, hypocrisy and deception is important. There are many readers looking for evil heroes such as the hero Fang Yuan. This novel became famous because of the cruelty and evil of the hero and his slaughter of millions without hesitation
Master_Of_gu:The boring thing is for the hero to be like the rest of the heroes in other novels. This is trite. As for the evil hero, it is difficult to predict his movements and actions. It is more fun. If killing increases your strength, why not do it?! And if it is theft that increases your strength, why not do this to your world, you determine the laws, get out of the well and look at the sky. My friend, the thing that humans enjoy the most is blood, betrayal, murder, theft, hypocrisy and deception is important. There are many readers looking for evil heroes such as the hero Fang Yuan. This novel became famous because of the cruelty and evil of the hero and his slaughter of millions without hesitation
Author I actually agree with the guy there I prefer evil mcs but don’t hesitate to add comedy and romance if it can improve the story. Even readers who enjoy evil still like some sprt of break so a hot snake wife would be appreciated for the mc. Author than that just like the dude said go wild and don’t worry no one wil get offended.
Evertruth727_:Slaughter, it is!... Thank you so much for the kind suggestion.