Review Detail of UltimateSenpai in Anime Multiverse Dimensional Chat Group
Review detail
This shameless author wants to say thanks to the readers who always support me. You know that this is the first novel I have written. I'm not that proficient in English, so my grammar and spelling might be bad. I'm trying hard to make my novel readable for people who used English as their first language. As for professional writer might find this novel just too simple. Well, I cannot use such complicated words, so I wrote simply. You might find this looks exactly the same as that popular chat group from akikan. Please let me tell you, I'm sure you understood that all anime plots and characters are the same. This novel might be similar because of using the same topic, the Chat Group system. If you don't like it, then don't trash talking like I'm plagiarizing or something. I wrote a different plot or story. There might be some similarities, but that's because of Anime or Novel canon. Ah, one more thing. I let the Chat Group members know that MC was reincarnated person because there will be a couple of reincarnated characters besides the MC.
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UltimateSenpai
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the characters lack depth, its like plot armor is forcing them to accept the scenarios. its lacking realism, u can't just brush it off after mc mocks shoyo hinata and make them buddies. also your english need work on tenses. daily updates is not imp, what's imp is to write a good one. if can't improve ur english then pick someone to read the draft for u and ask his opinion.
I understand. That's why I try to improvise every chapter I publish. I made this novel without the help of others, so what else can I do besides reading comments or advice from readers.
Ze_plant:the characters lack depth, its like plot armor is forcing them to accept the scenarios. its lacking realism, u can't just brush it off after mc mocks shoyo hinata and make them buddies. also your english need work on tenses. daily updates is not imp, what's imp is to write a good one. if can't improve ur english then pick someone to read the draft for u and ask his opinion.
UltimateSenpai:I understand. That's why I try to improvise every chapter I publish. I made this novel without the help of others, so what else can I do besides reading comments or advice from readers.
UltimateSenpai:I understand. That's why I try to improvise every chapter I publish. I made this novel without the help of others, so what else can I do besides reading comments or advice from readers.
I'll try to edit it if I have time. because editing it takes a long time. If only I had a close friend who could speak English and like to read novels, I definitely asked my friend for help.
Ze_plant:edit the chapters.
UltimateSenpai:I understand. That's why I try to improvise every chapter I publish. I made this novel without the help of others, so what else can I do besides reading comments or advice from readers.
UltimateSenpai:I understand. That's why I try to improvise every chapter I publish. I made this novel without the help of others, so what else can I do besides reading comments or advice from readers.
Mortal_marta:Author whether this Izumi will go back with Kyoko or choose to go out with Tabane
Aleks_Shu_RUS:author, are you from Russia, Mongolia, China or Indonesia? If from Russia, can you post fanfiction in Russian on ficbook?
