Review Detail of PurpleDao in Martial Arts System

Hello author, *SPOILERS & DETAILS* So I have started your story a couple days ago and I think overall it is pretty good as the first book you wrote. In fact better than many books that may be an author third story. I can see the time and effort you put to update stably and form a background for the world we are reading. But, I think the MC is just moderate, his maturity considering his previous life level of stature taking into account how he even has a legacy is a little low though. I get the 15 year old now, 16 year old mind affecting his mentality but it's still meh to me. Like how he does some shameless* things or interacts with friends like Lucas... 😑. I feel like some characters could have been fleshed out better or show that MC still interacts with them. As of 296 which is where I am, I don't feel like MC remembers or communicates with his family or friends like Lucas or Sylver (spelt his name wrong I know). Especially considering how those are things he seems to value. I think it would be nice to see him develop his friendship more with his teammates at the High School of Fighting. More sparring, more team bonding. I was also a little put off by how soon he moved in with Azura, I think there relationship is more obsession than love, personally and Ichiro is the one really contributing. Like I don't look down on her but Ichiro has made her better, even bettered her life, risked his life and it looks like you foreshadow in the future she will be a Grandmaster of his technique, she didn't have to go through a test a nothing. ( Yeah she's his girlfriend but still...ugh to me). She hasn't shown great personality or possible development. While Ichiro would still like her before, he knew about her powerful dad or she was weak, I think it's really her beauty first rather than personality. Then they went to the final stage so soon -just 16- and in a love hotel 🙄😅, honestly thought it was a bit funny. I mean I think he should of met someone when he was still weak or when he was at the top, like the elf girl. Azura kind of knew oh he has great looks and limitless potential. I think the idea/plot that they are at war with the beasts that's completely overlooked or rather obscure. I think even common people should be aware of the dangers but it like they aren't. Personally I think it would be great if you clarified how techniques or development before the age of growth does use energy in the air but the age of growth is a more distinct process. Like at the age of 18 a hidden channel in the body opens or something like that you know. Finally, the most important thing is, the fights and the Martial Art scenes, those are spectacular. His energy and mentality when it comes to fighting is personally what has kept me so far besides the other issues and why my rating is still so high. The fight scenes get my blood pumping, heart racing and even cheering when he wins. The details and thoughts are all amazing in my opinion when it comes to fighting. And how he triumphs when it's unlikely is even better. I must say that I'm so thankful for the story because it's been interesting and great at times. personally I think if you took this story right now and rewrote it could even be better. But it's your first story so I hope to see even better in the future 😆. I'm not sure if I'll continue reading but I'll see. I mean I have noticed the improvements along with the way.