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DZsTheOnlyWay
DZsTheOnlyWayLv122yrDZsTheOnlyWay

i was rlly loving it, and just when i was about to purchase the privileges, i opened the chapter 174.. and droped... that was the worst decision i ever saw of an author.. im rlly rlly sad about it and if i could i wold just complain in everysingle fckng chapter trying to change your mind, but i wont use my fastpasses and coins in smthing so stupid. 5 stars until chapter 174, 0 stars after it, i will just give a 2,5

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Martial Arts System

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Starvation
StarvationLv10Starvation

Hello, what's the nature of that decision, world building , character design,etcetera. Just when and where did it go so bad that you couldn't bare with it ? No need for spoilers, you could just describe the phenomenom. Thank you.

ekatn
ekatnLv4ekatn

El autor cambio el capítulo por " algunas sugerencias" spoiler abajo Canceló el harem de azura y la elfa, dice que las hará mejores amigas ahora por las sugerencias que leyo, dice que lo dejara solo de Ichigo y azura.

Starvation:Hello, what's the nature of that decision, world building , character design,etcetera. Just when and where did it go so bad that you couldn't bare with it ? No need for spoilers, you could just describe the phenomenom. Thank you.
DZsTheOnlyWay
DZsTheOnlyWayLv12DZsTheOnlyWay

Basically he hyped everyone in the early chapters (wont say why), and in chapter 174 he changes his mind bcs of some "suggestions"

Starvation:Hello, what's the nature of that decision, world building , character design,etcetera. Just when and where did it go so bad that you couldn't bare with it ? No need for spoilers, you could just describe the phenomenom. Thank you.
bewoulf3000
bewoulf3000Lv10bewoulf3000

The writing quality sadly sounds like a 12 year old who just learned about it in school. You also try to hard to recreate typical manga or anime scenes. Another good hint of mine would be to let your readers use their brains a little you don't have to describe everything. Fighting scenes in 3 person is ok if you can pull it off. A fighting scene needs to give you goosebumps as if you yourself would be in the fight. Quality before quantity! Redo your early chapters please!

Thereviewer
ThereviewerLv3Thereviewer

Author says like 10-20 chapters later in an announcement that they won’t be lovers and she will be azura’s friend because he was getting complaints about people not wanting a story like that or something