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Review Detail of RingoBrown in Martial Arts System

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RingoBrown
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- Simp paradise. He meets a girl online, 5 mins. later he gives her 10 million dollars after listening to her sob story. MC was a martial arts master with 40+ years of experience. He reincarnates into a 15 year old and acts like a 12 year old. His 40+ years of maturity and knowledge vanishes. He speaks with inexperience and naïveté. The earlier chapters are filled with plotholes. The author tries his best to cover them up later in the story but it causes inconsistencies in the plot moving forward. The outline of the story is decent enough for me to have stuck around for as long as I did, but the plot development and inconsistencies just ruins it for me. If you’re into annoying MC’s who bully their bestfriend and is a MAJOR simp, then this book is for you.

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Suzune_Simp
Suzune_SimpLv11Suzune_Simp

unfortunately it's not for me

FTLnovaKid
FTLnovaKidLv12FTLnovaKid

Thanks for the warning.

CiaaDReader
CiaaDReaderLv11CiaaDReader

I totally agree to you with this, I'm at 201 now and as I read throughout the novel it slowly lose its taste. basically it started when he started having relationship with Azura his girlfriend. and everything feels like a filler because of how it was way to forced . blacksmithing skill was introduced so badly it could've been written way better but nah. still it has his hype moments but yeah his character development are uninteresting,big disappointed*sigh for that. it could've been better if the relationship between Azura his girlfriend has not been executed. my man became so simp and became yandere so disappointed about it.

a_commoner
a_commonerLv5a_commoner

You forgot to say that the both the MC and the story are boring and uninteresting.

WOWIE
WOWIELv4WOWIE

Thanks for the warning..

UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11UncleDodger

thank you for saving my time

ebit_setiawan
ebit_setiawanLv1ebit_setiawan

p

Suzune_Simp:unfortunately it's not for me
ebit_setiawan
ebit_setiawanLv1ebit_setiawan

piu

Suzune_Simp:unfortunately it's not for me
MilkGod_disciple
MilkGod_discipleLv3MilkGod_disciple

Gets better

a_commoner:You forgot to say that the both the MC and the story are boring and uninteresting.
OnePun
OnePunLv6OnePun

SIMP

MilkGod_disciple:Gets better
MilkGod_disciple
MilkGod_discipleLv3MilkGod_disciple

OnePun:SIMP
Darcyen
DarcyenLv1Darcyen

Thanks dodged a bullet

Saikat_Chowdhury_7036
Saikat_Chowdhury_7036Lv4Saikat_Chowdhury_7036

Story with many harem members yet MC is a total shrimp!!I mean,whats the point of having girls!!Thats why either write novel without harem.If harem,then make every romantic interest wife,like Royal dragon and phoenix transmigrate to earth.Its not ad but I really like ruthless mc!At least,they will never be shrimp!But I also dislike MC having woman who is not pure!!It irritating!

Universal_Monarch
Universal_MonarchLv1Universal_Monarch

hmm..

Suzune_Simp:unfortunately it's not for me
Universal_Monarch
Universal_MonarchLv1Universal_Monarch

the novel? if so then i agree

Suzune_Simp:unfortunately it's not for me
sabazurc
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So you really are one?

MilkGod_disciple:
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