Review Detail of Paulo_D_Manoel in Martial Arts System

Item: Martial Arts System
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

Paulo_D_ManoelLv42yrPaulo_D_Manoel

man,this story is kinda stupid,the people in this are not believable, I got a couple of laughs here and there,but the world building doesn't make sense.

Martial Arts System

Alekzi

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Highspirit25Lv2Highspirit25

Why would say that Then tell us what is wrong with the story please

1yr

Paulo_D_ManoelLv4Paulo_D_Manoel

the world building is all over the place, can't tell for sure, to much time has passed when I read it.

Highspirit25:Why would say that Then tell us what is wrong with the story please

1yr