Review Detail of Alekzi in Martial Arts System

Item: Martial Arts System
Rating: 5

Review detail

AlekziAuthor2yrAlekzi

Author Update - I have looked at my previous chapters until 40, and I gotta admit that some parts were slightly amateurish and badly written, but chapters from 40 start getting better, I promise. I have written quite a lot of drafts, up to 70 chapter already and it keeps increasing and a lot of interesting things are happening in the life of Ichiro, even I, as a writer I am honestly surprised of the things I wrote and I think most of you will enjoy it, so please read at least up to 50, because a lot of interesting things start happening after it, and if you still don't like the novel, then you should prob it because this novel isn't probably for your taste then. Thanks for readind and I hope you will enjoy.

Martial Arts System

Alekzi

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DarkMistLv12DarkMist

Did you improve or edited the first 40 chapters?

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_VoidSlayer_Lv4_VoidSlayer_

i kinda dont like the fact that afte age 45 you cant get stronger no matter what and also it doesnt make sense how after 45 you cant get stronger cus as you get stronger you should technically be able to live longer and thus prolonging their peak

2yr

Enlightened_RookieLv13Enlightened_Rookie

I think they mighg be able to overcome It once they reach martial divinity

2yr

MrNightmareLv3MrNightmare

we need more chapters or bonus chapter, cliffhanger is killing me author

2yr

MrNightmareLv3MrNightmare

chapters are getting wayy to short, author way to much cliffhanger hangers might let people quit reading your book. of course not future readers that is.

2yr

Almas_Farhan_ArnobLv4Almas_Farhan_Arnob

is it harem or single

2yr

ChaosMasterLv14ChaosMaster

Its single love

Almas_Farhan_Arnob:is it harem or single

2yr

Darktea9876Lv3Darktea9876

in first 40 Ch , especially 15-40 in tournament MC is too childish. MC is 45 year old , those joke is so lame that it makes me annoyed. does Mc personality become more mature in following chapter? because if not I will drop the story , not my type.

2yr

Peter_ClaudioLv15Peter_Claudio

couldn5 u have left the elf lover...i loved that idea

2yr

King_KayLv4King_Kay

Ok let’s talk about azura SUPER CLINGY & yandere side he has to write a diary explaining his actions… and he is ok with it come on author san that’s jus not right where is his pride

2yr

LacastrianLv4Lacastrian

some parts were very amateurish and badly written*

2yr

Naysay3rLv11Naysay3r

Yeah, I don't like it either. At the early chapters, it is mentioned that the scientists are finding a cure for someone who has gone through "Age of Deterioration".

_VoidSlayer_:i kinda dont like the fact that afte age 45 you cant get stronger no matter what and also it doesnt make sense how after 45 you cant get stronger cus as you get stronger you should technically be able to live longer and thus prolonging their peak

2yr

Anonymous_Reader06Lv13Anonymous_Reader06

Wish you would have included the elf girl.😔

2yr

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

It's harem now😭😭

ChaosMaster:Its single love

2yr

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

I stopped cuz it became a harem I can barely bear romance but harem? Never!!!!!!!

Almas_Farhan_Arnob:is it harem or single

2yr

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

She is not included? Then is it a harem or not If it's not I'll continue the novel

Anonymous_Reader06:Wish you would have included the elf girl.😔

2yr

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

Author sama please till me If this is a harem or not I'm at ch174 but I don't want to waste my time if it's a harem

2yr

Anonymous_Reader06Lv13Anonymous_Reader06

It's not harem. Check the note at the beginning of ch 223.

2yr

Anonymous_Reader06Lv13Anonymous_Reader06

The elf girl will become Azura's best friend, not Ichiro's lover....

Ashborn1609:She is not included? Then is it a harem or not If it's not I'll continue the novel

2yr

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

thx I can now continue reading it

Anonymous_Reader06:The elf girl will become Azura's best friend, not Ichiro's lover....

2yr