Review Detail of lord_dark in Harry Potter : Arc of Embodiment ( Rewrite )

The novel was good at first but then the novel becomes boring and bad. 1- The protagonist becomes the strongest character in the first 20 chapters I'm talking about Excalibur. 2- I understand the nerfed magic of the arc of embodiment but you can do it in a good way like: anything  Magical or related to magic increases the cost of magic very dramatically.  Controlling this magic is very difficult, and the protagonist goes to Howgord in order to learn how to control his magic.  His body can't stand this kind of magic and it takes a long time to rest after using this magic. 3- Politics I'm reading a novel about magic for the sake of magic (politics can be after graduation in order to improve the world of magic with Harry and the others).4- protagonist is very rich. What is the point? The protagonist can retire And buy a palace Hire a private tutor to teach him magic. If he is poor, you can use this as motivation to improve his life. 5- The novel has no goal. The protagonist is boring. The protagonist advances only to advance, nothing else. 6- protagonist is a magician. Why do you make him a warrior? This makes me tired. 7- Why does the protagonist become stupid? I mean, he is a university student. He cannot travel outside Britain. Who said this because suddenly the whole world is watching him for no reason? After he returns to life, he could have been made to travel the world and increase his experience before  Joining the school you could have made him go to an orphanage and use magic in order to manipulate the minds of adults in order to be adopted and after that he can travel around the world.  .... This is my review of the novel, which raised my hopes and disappointed me, and that is why the review is long. Usually, I drop the novel and go looking for another one, but this novel attracted my attention because it had a good start after that, it disappointed me.If the author of the novel is reading this review, I do not want you to stop writing, we all make mistakes and learn. You can modify and improve this novel. There is nothing wrong with this. I wish you success. I will return to this story after a while. I have not lost all my hope in it yet. I hope when  I will come back to this story it will be much better farewell.🧐