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Review Detail of Ashmodai in Harry Potter : Arc of Embodiment ( Rewrite )

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Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv42yrAshmodai

So I don't really see the point of reading this story. Chapter 1 is basically MC wakes up finds dead bodies where he got a house trunk, books, wands, cash, potions including felix felicis. And he is so OP that by chapter 4 it's only a matter of time before he can do ANYTHING with his magic. There is no tension. Nothing that would make you want to read. The MC is boring and one dimensional.

Harry Potter : Arc of Embodiment ( Rewrite )

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Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

Oh Wow he is lord Pendragon and Le Fay and basically owns whole magical Britain. What a plot twist... That's so dumb.

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Goatless_Pillow
Goatless_PillowLv2Goatless_Pillow

phew dodged a bullet there, thx for that, I'm all up for OP characters but at least build it up and make it worth it in the end, reading this would've triggered me so bad I would've left cancer comments all over XD

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Senaio
SenaioLv3Senaio

OP????? What OP?? Arthur nerfed him very much and I mean very very much. AOE dosent need any energy to work it only needs the users imagination. Anything the user want will came true. And Arthur made him need energy, mental anergy and magic energy so that the AOE can work. He uses one time and he is tired

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