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Status: C23 The first few chapters are a bit confusing but it goes well from ch5. The world bg is a bit confusing too. Giving too much info at a time is not so good cuz we tend to forget them later on if those aren't mentioned. And author pls don't add time skips and flashbacks for a short time period or when a situation is not complete. No one likes to get interrupted in the flow. ofc time-skips, flashbacks and different situations for a broad view is good. but too many of em causes tack of intrest. Review may change with upcoming chps ofc.

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Hell's Insanity

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Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. But I thought not adding enough information would make it confusing, but it seems I added a little too much.