Review Detail of Blinddesire in Unscientific Beast Taming

i love this story, but i just can't understand why such a good story has poor translation when worse stories have better translation. most of the time he or she is mixed up and lots of double pasted paragraphs. and chapters split into many parts so the flow feels cut off =/. i can understand splitting large chaptees into 2 or possibly at most 4 parts but 5 or more is poor quality.