Review Detail of YungBrosketi in The Ultimate Birthright

Okay so I'm only 12 chapters in but this seems like it'll be a great addition to my library. Starting with writing quality the novel seems fine. I haven't noticed any grammar errors yet and if there are some they aren't significant enough to make a sentence unreadable. Stability of updates will have to be seen over time but right now I'm giving it a 5 star. Story development seems fine right now. It feels a bit rushed at the moment with so many big things being dropped on us right from the get go but I understand that this is a pre established universe with the mc already knowing these people. I just hope the author does a good job of getting us adjusted to all the characters currently introduced before adding any more significant characters or moving the story to far forward. My recommendation is that before anything significant happens to force the story forward we get a couple lull chapters with more character development. That or you have something huge happen which will force the established characters together and then use that to develop their characters. Character design is probably the best part about the book. The mc is so refreshing compared to what you usually find on this site. Either you get the mc who doesn't care about women because he's "only focusing on revenge" or "already has someone in his heart" or you get the mc who is out here catching women like pokemon without ever getting an established relationship with them. This novel could develop this problem with some characters and only time will tell if it does but it seems unlikely. Other than that the characters and their interactions are super humorous and very realistic. All the established characters have unique relationships with the mc and have unique personalities that will need time to be dug out. World background has yet to be revealed much yet. Luckily we had an info dump chapter which helped a lot and from what I've read the world seems simple yet interesting enough. The first half of this story will presumably happen within the already established "world" and later parts of the story will probably branch out from this area (typical set up for a cultivation novel. The "big fish in a small pond" until its revealed that the MC is actually a "small fish in a large ocean". Nothing special about this world building so far but nothing to be upset about) SPOILERS Author I would really like to address some of the characters and what i personally feel. Please do not force the MC's relationship with any character and let them develop naturally. You have a great way of making dialogue unique and entertaining and i hope that translates to good character development. The sister we need more time to get to know her beyond her "love for the mc". Same thing for the childhood best friend girl. Enya is a super interesting character but I hope her and the MC's relationship remains more platonic until we know more about her. My favorite girl so far is the girl the MC rescued because right now she's seen the most character development. I just hope there's more to her than meets the eye. Other than that great work!