Review Detail of rodrigo_melo in Pokemon: The Beginning

Better than average, worth your time i guess, the only issue i have is the updates, it's sucks. The recent chapter now is 25, and it has been 8 days since it updated. Here the Mc is transmigrated in a teenage during a class a few days before receive his first pokemon egg, the thing is that i wanted it to be like that since he was born, but here he wakes up like a few days before receive his first pokemon, which is not a bad thing, but in my opnion i think it would be better if he transmigrated in a newborn. The story development is average, i don't feel much of the Mc evolving and learning more about himself as the story goes on, but this is compesated by the action part which is pretty decent. The dialog was obviously made by a amateur, but it's not that bad, i mean, i've seen worse. The world background is good, we feel when the eviorement changes and how it affects the characters, and the author often talk about other organizations around the world that the Mc is gonna try do avoid or use. the world build for me is more abotu the factions and powerhouses in the world than the biomes and enviorement itself, and the world background here use this as the story progresses. We still gonna have to see how the story is going to be later, now is pretty decent but who know? Most of the novels i saw started pretty well too, but later got bad because the author got lazy, hopes this doesn't happen here.