Review Detail of DaoisttwG3qW in Only I Am A Reader

Why do you like writing unfinished sentences with «...» after each paragraph it finally become unreadable, incomprehensible with lot of commentary that like to ask stupid questions in order to make up excuses for filler. Example of the novel structure. Chapter 411...onomatopoeia [commentary] did leo... onomatopoeia [commentary] eat a clown...?! onomatopoeia, onomatopoeia, onomatopoeia [commentary] Isn't Revealing his secret skill stupid? He don't really know his own skill operate, he travel in a parallel universe 2time and he reassure Yeon that she is just a fiction in a novel.(MC is truly a master of decduction lol) Is the existence of novel allowing the creation of parallel universes or parallele universe the origine of the creation of a novel. Or maybe Leo is half-human and half-deity(like hercule or minautor &c...) his skill creating new reality. There is something stupid how the Mc defeated the protagonist(a little before chapter 411), he didn't really prepare, he didn't have any proper counter, he wasn't even in the same level but wasn't really interested to true preparation but always say it no the time then final resolution, he trick the protagonist... it was nonesense after nonesense so whynot 411 chapters to visite just 2worlds and each is hyper repetitive on level up then level up then level up... This is too much. Are you stuck on a pre-puberty teen period where you would have dream if cultivation world existed? Why don't we see the MC in his reality trying to use his new skill? Or skill other than the combat bµllsh*t. Why is he trying to just read cultivation novel i thought he could read anything? Suddenly lazy? He could read "Saw"(horror-thriller), "Cube"(investigation novel with pulze to solve), "Avatar"(adventure, with new dialect discovery, new culture). You can imagine as i have almost reach my upper limit... until those sentences: "How could I hate you?! I was the stupid one for doubting my own heart. Let's spend every following second together. No, please let me spend it with you!" Since he was the one in the wrong, Leo naturally had to be the one to make it up. "Also, please stop crying, my heart can't take it either." Wiping away Yeon's precious tears, Leo pulled her into his embrace. What a great and experienced reader was he! In the end, he was just an insecure idiot who made his partner cry. "Mm, I won't cry anymore, so don't make such a sad face either!" You've succeeded destroying my stomac here, with an amalgam of lovey-dovey, emotional bµllsh*t, some tears , the MC telling all his life as if it was really interesting. But ill give you a scoop, i utterly don't care! Can You delete the AI that's writing in your stead? I'm sure your not 14yo I've got enought bullsh*t with emotional cr@p and lovey-dovey nonesense for a life time when i read "Suprem Magnus".