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Pie_Daddy
Pie_DaddyAuthor2yrPie_Daddy

I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ‘ I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ‘ I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ‘ I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ‘

DanMachi: Ascension of the White Emperor

Pie_Daddy

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necromancertech999
necromancertech999Lv2necromancertech999

It better than most stories and I didn't really find any grammar issues also nice story keep up good work

Sajid_Mehmood
Sajid_MehmoodLv4Sajid_Mehmood

it's not the grammer it your bloody brain i mean come on great the mc is a goody two shoes of a orphan and was betrayed and all butt come on getting a godees angry for what a orphan getting betrayed and some of us are suffering from abusive parent to come home to a brainless writer that doen't have a bloody idea of great fanfic for some of us to read

Pie_Daddy
Pie_DaddyAuthorPie_Daddy

Then stop reading it and find other fanfics to read. Or you could write your own you birdbrain. Just so you know, it's G R A M M A R not G R A M M E R

Sajid_Mehmood:it's not the grammer it your bloody brain i mean come on great the mc is a goody two shoes of a orphan and was betrayed and all butt come on getting a godees angry for what a orphan getting betrayed and some of us are suffering from abusive parent to come home to a brainless writer that doen't have a bloody idea of great fanfic for some of us to read
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

thanks u saved my time PHEW!! dodged this one if this is really a trashy as u say I bet it is then thanks bro

Sajid_Mehmood:it's not the grammer it your bloody brain i mean come on great the mc is a goody two shoes of a orphan and was betrayed and all butt come on getting a godees angry for what a orphan getting betrayed and some of us are suffering from abusive parent to come home to a brainless writer that doen't have a bloody idea of great fanfic for some of us to read
Sun_Demon
Sun_DemonLv4Sun_Demon

You can use the Grammarly app. It will help you edit everything you write. Best of luck.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Pie_Daddy:Then stop reading it and find other fanfics to read. Or you could write your own you birdbrain. Just so you know, it's G R A M M A R not G R A M M E R
MT_Rouse
MT_RouseLv3MT_Rouse

Great book

Segsy_Deadpool
Segsy_DeadpoolLv4Segsy_Deadpool

is this novel still ongoing or is it dropped ?

Pie_Daddy
Pie_DaddyAuthorPie_Daddy

still on going. Author's a bit busy atm. But I'm raking time to write as well

Segsy_Deadpool:is this novel still ongoing or is it dropped ?