I read it all after it was finished so I don't know about that, but the story and characters were great, a bit of Grammer and pronouns got switched or pit at the wrong end of a sentence but I thunk that was more translation error and didn't detract from the Quality of the story
Corty
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LIKEYes, that was an error on my part. I recently started to put up this at another site and I was finally told I did it wrong, the whole time! Well. shit. I am doing a rework, fixing the name and pronoun problems with other grammar fixes. I know its not much by now but I should be done with it before the end of the year and i am going to replace all chapters. Sorry about that in retrospective for everyone who reads it now.
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