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ActivatedTuna
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I'll just start by touching on the parts of the story that didn't net a 5 stars from me: 1. The story while I love it does feel like it's rushing to get to the next part, I don't feel like I'm missing anything but it feels like it just can't wait to get to the next part and so it's on fast forwards with small breaks for character developments now and then. 2. The world's background isn't very flushed out, which is fine if it isn't a focus atm but I have to rate it so I am. It's a fairly simple fantasy world so far with many races and pockets of tension fueling minor conflict now and then. Overall my enjoyment of the story as a whole is very high and I'm here for the characters and their story and have loved every bit of it so far. Came for Yuri, will probably get that but in the mean time I've gotten a weak to strong, fluffy story with a cute spider. Who doesn't love a cute spider?

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The Knightly Elven… Spider? [GL litRPG]

Faragi

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ActivatedTuna
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I replied with the review, hope you can see it though it lost it formatting so it's a wall of text. if you still can't see that I'll delete it and re post the review.

Faragi:somehow I cant see this review
Faragi
FaragiAuthorFaragi

why can't I see this review? D:

Faragi
FaragiAuthorFaragi

somehow I cant see this review

Faragi
FaragiAuthorFaragi

Nope, I just can't see it. It's so weird. I have seen it happen more than once, though. If you like, try reposting it.

ActivatedTuna:I replied with the review, hope you can see it though it lost it formatting so it's a wall of text. if you still can't see that I'll delete it and re post the review.