I'm very surprised that after walking around for 10 years in complete darkness the mc hasn't gone insane lol. This novel has a nice, solid plot but is plagued by capitalization errors. Majority of your sentences start with a common letter. All sentences should begin with a capital letter. That was the only issue for me. The chapters were short but they were meaningful. All the best on your writing journey [img=recommend]
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