Review Detail of Black_phoenix8 in Star Immortal

Item: Star Immortal
Rating: 5

Review detail

Black_phoenix8Author2yrBlack_phoenix8

I think my novel is good. if you don't believe who will. English is not my first language so excuse me for my mistakes.----++++-----------------

Black_phoenix8

Liked by 8 people

dyingAntLv11dyingAnt

Can you get someone to proofread the English or put the chapters through grammarly before publishing [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

2yr

DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

update schedule?

2yr

g_man67Lv3g_man67

This is good just needs a little polishing.

2yr

MightBeGayLv14MightBeGay

whats the romance like? A harem? alone or 1 partner? late early or mid?

2yr