Review Detail of Daoist502799 in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Congratulations, the author knows how to write. but the work has positive and negative points. positives: .family relationship, (which raises flags of possible tragedies later in history). .system for seeing the potential of Pokémon. .the battle clubs by types. .give a leading role to the parents (the tournament they participated in was cool) NEGATIVES Lots of useless information, (I'm talking about information like: I'm going to eat the chicken here and since I like to eat and blah blah blah... ; or I arrived at the department at 3 o'clock and to avoid getting scolded I woke up 15 minutes earlier, I preferred I didn't talk to my Pokémon and I went straight to the door, after making sure blah blah blah... that's nonsense! .lots of explanation. .he hasn't even started the journey and there are too many pokemon... if there were only 3 it would be very good. but the amount there is in chapter 611 and the journey hasn't even started yet... . and the Pokémon are extremely strong... what fun will it be if he isn't developing them on a daily basis with battles and defeats but rather in 'utopia'.... .I feel that it had and has enormous potential but the author has to decide whether to continue making chapters full of sausages. .human battle championships are boring (in my opinion) pokemon fan fic... I don't want to read about humans as the 'stars'... .raises a lot of flags about things that could happen, but only to hook the reader... 600 chapters and nothing happened (the attempted murders?? that's meant to deceive. I don't recommend it for those who don't have patience... I don't recommend it if someone realizes they're being fooled. I don't recommend it if you have better options. I recommend it if you have time, a lot of time, too much time... Author writes well, but is too slow.