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Review Detail of cockroach1523 in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

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cockroach1523
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it's good and just like the author says it's very slow paced to the point that I'm contemplating whether I should continue or not because I know interesting stuff is going to happen but I'm blue balling myself because I want to know what happens in the story. I wish there was like one section that was like ten chapter to just explain his childhood up in a short yet understandable way until he starts his journey like short chapter explaining the materials he got the pokemon he growth his Pokemon's growth his friends ect you get the point either than that a banger I just got to power through until he gets older

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Azrail93

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cockroach1523
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I'm not saying I dislike the slow pace I just prefer a info dump that explains the story at a faster pace while also explaining the situations in his life like I don't think many people when the Mc is a child it's boring because what can he do I understand that in this one he's still able to do stuff from a young age but it's very restricted so it makes it less interesting I still will read this I just want to complain because my tiny little squrril brain likes fast and not slow

Azrail93
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Thank you for the review🙂